Friday 16 May 2014

My Special Place at school


Reflection
I was learning how to add detail using my five senses.
One thing that worked well for me was going to my special place to get ideas.
One thing I could do better next time is to use my smell sense.
Overall I found this work fun because I love to write using my senses, and also writing about my favourite places.

Thursday 15 May 2014

Obituary Leslie Burke



Reflection
I was learning how to write an obituary about Leslie Burke from the novel Bridge To Terabithia.
One thing that worked well for me was that we got to watch the movie and the book to help us out a lot when writing this.  One thing I could do better next time is to write more things about how Leslie helped out people in the story.  Overall I thought this work was fun because we got to write a real obituary about a person and add in the years she was alive and even put in pictures.